My lost love!

August 25, 2008 at 5:05 pm (Blogroll)

She stood there by the shore
Smiling and waving
Being greeted by the crowd
That worshipped winners!

I waved my hand,
But my hand was just another hand in the crowd
I shouted her name
But my voice was lost in the noise

My love was no more my love
I was not hers anymore
I was not the one
That she would want to be with!

The realization was hard
I started sinking
Sinking slowly but steadily
while hoping against hope that my love would see me

As I went down in the quick sand,
I strectched my hand out
To my love, wishing she would hold me
and pull me out of my wretchedness

She smiled and waved,
not to me but to the crowd
and did not see me
For she was too busy!

Her image became blur in my moist eyes
and my heart heavy
No, Not because I was sinking
But because she didn’t want me!

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1 Comment

  1. bindu said,

    well, here are a few of mine… not neruda once again, but inspired by him nonetheless!!!

    Obituary to my Sunshine…
    (With apologies to Pablo Neruda)

    Pablo gave me the lines, but my sunshine gave me the pain.
    Taught me how to dip my words in profound agony
    And write an obituary for him.
    Him – whom I loved more than the sun.

    The day he died was beautiful, filled with life.
    The sun shone brightly, warming me,
    Never hinting at the sudden death
    Which would snatch away my own ray of sunshine.

    I knew I had to say a brief goodbye
    We would meet again, it wasn’t death.
    Like Pablo, I would write and sing
    Tender love songs for him.
    My love would reach out and touch him
    Unseen yes, unfelt, never.

    I did not heed the nameless evil
    That stalked me.
    Nor the core of darkness
    In my sunshine’s soul.
    He left me, abandoning me cruelly,
    Leaving me naked and exposed
    To the eyes of my ruthless foe.
    He died that day. Yes, he died.

    And now like Pablo I tell myself –
    This is the last hurt he’ll make me feel,
    These the last lines I’ll ever write for him.
    He’s dead and my sunshine is no more.

    ***********

    Forgetting You

    I remember you,
    Remember the way your eyes shone,
    And lit up your face,
    The way your laughter drowned all sadness..
    A ray of sunshine,
    Ephemeral, fleeting.

    The nights are darker now,
    More enveloping,
    Frightening after your brightness.
    You’ve gone away,
    Forgotten me in the noisy shandy
    Of your life.

    I will too, in time
    In just a little more time.

    I’ll forget those crazy moments
    When time stopped
    As we found one another
    In each other’s eyes
    Forget those nights
    Of intense passion
    When we were welded together
    While being separated by miles.

    Forget how the hated tea
    Became a bewitching brew
    Sealing our friendship.
    Forget the wealth of mischief
    In your eyes,
    Forget that wonderful laughter,
    Which I loved
    And all those special moments
    Which made you uniquely mine
    And me uniquely yours.

    Yes, darling heart, I’ll forget.
    I’ll not mourn, I’ll not cry.
    I will go on
    But with a heart which has grown dark
    And a life which has turned bleak
    And with a sunshine shaped hole
    In my small universe
    Which you had filled.

    *******************

    Absence.

    I never knew, my love
    What pain was
    Till you taught me.

    Never knew how love could kill
    Destroy and pillage
    Create a desolate, anguished war field
    Where once a heart throbbed
    Till you showed me.

    Never did I know
    What missing was
    Till you vanished so totally
    Leaving me bewildered and blind
    In a world which ceased to exist.

    I did not know, my darling
    How I clung to your sunshine warmth
    Till the winter chill
    descended into my bones
    Snatching the little life
    Left in me.

    I’d forgotten to love,
    Forgotten to feel
    Forgotten to live
    Till you woke me up
    With your sparkling eyes.

    This is just a continuation
    Of the lesson you started long ago.
    Once you taught me to live
    Now you’ve taught me
    The art of dying
    With a smile on my lips
    And a hole in my heart.

    ***********

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